Animation Feedback

This is my video feed back from my animation class.












Written audience feedback ( Non-classmate)




" I enjoyed watching Faisa animation video it was very child friendly and the music matched the characters, I understood the narrative behind the characters; I could tell that the yellow unicorn was the father, the purple unicorn was the mother and the smallest blue unicorn was the child. The animation was about the parents fighting and the child was in the middle of the conflict and in the end he gave up but the parents made up and they lived happily ever after. Some mistake that caught my eye was in some shots I saw your jacket and arm which interrupted the animation but other than that I like it. " - Leona